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And now I will review myself. Have fun reading the ridiculously long comment.
Good: *Comic had some humorous points *The panels were okay, I guess. Bad: *Storyline's choppy *Kokoro's personality's is off (sorry  , but I know you put that she was outgoing and nice, but in your comic it kinda felt different, so I wasn't sure what to go with, so I just went with what's up there.)*Cape flaws (I think I may have forgotten to put Faye's cape on this page, too. Will be fixed. But for the other ones, they were there, but they were looking weird.) *Horrible way to win (WTF? This comic doesn't make any sense! Kokoro could still win by poking Faye with that really awesome staff!) *Sometimes the pictures didn't match the dialogue very well and almost crosses the line to really really really bad. *Looks sloppy and half assed (but I did try, really.) *Sometimes the speech bubbles collided with the picture. *Faye's shield looked slightly different in every picture. (Not on purpose, of course.) *Sometimes the facial expressions weren't suited well. *The pages could use more panels, and there was a gap sometimes between actions. *Kokoro's shirt got longer, shorter, and then longer again. And that's several reasons why I shouldn't win. I really tried hard, and then I went over it and found all of that (the thing sitting right on top of this paragraph) in my comic. Shit. Have fun Ms. Kokoro. I just lost my first ever round of a tourny to you! 8D... I do realize I've just pushed myself off of a metaphorical cliff, thanks. Cover:[link] Page One: [link] Page Two:[link] Page Three:[link] Page Four:[link] Page Five:[link] Page Six:[link] Page Seven:[link] Page Eight:[link] Page Nine:[link] Page Ten:[link] Page Eleven:[link] Page Twelve:[link] Page Thirteen:[link] Page Fourteen:[link] Page Fifteen:[link] Page Sixteen:[link] Page Seventeen: [link] Page Eighteen: YOU HAVE REACHED THE END OF THE COMIC, MKAY? Faye (C) Me. Kokoro (C) Sprugs and Inuzuma (c)  |
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It's not that funny... is it?
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The bad: I wish that there was background but I won't bicth about that much since I know how hard it is to draw. Some of the pages did looked sort of rushed. I know you were hurrying to finish this, but please remeber that if you need more time just tell me instead of just rushing your work, I won't bite your bead off if your just ask and your art with thank you XD The protrayal of your oppenet was slightly off but you did Inu just fine.
Good work though next time PLEASE tell me or Dark you need more time instead rushing.
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The background would be there if it was in color. I hate linearting backgrounds unless I know I'm going to put color, and I knew there would be no time with the deadline.
I don't like complaining about deadlines, and besides, I had a lot of time, and I threw it down the toliet by procrastinating (and the small fact I lost my papers, drew 18 new pages, and then found it didn't help much either.). It's okay about the deadline thing, don't worry. And I know you won't bite my head off. Your mouth is probably too small. I'm not sure how to portray Kokoro, because the description is unclear.
I promise I will, because I feel guilty about making you worry.
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She said blood and gore is alright too.
Maybe one day Alliance and Faye will fight (if I happen to win, that is)
Faye: ... he's big, strong, and one of his scars kinda looks like a heart.
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